I
I haven’t always been so pretty
I
I haven’t been so confident either
I
I have had issues with my family & friends
I
I have been a fighter
But I
I dont know how to betray you
And I
I dont know how to keep my promises
Oh I
I cant foresee future
So I
I cant accept or deny
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SUSPENSEFULLY BEAUTIFUL.
thanks 😉
Love it. Love the way your writing stays with me. On a train or in the garden…..
Thanks a ton! *all smiles*
As usual crisp and deep.
Thanks Justine.
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thank you so so much 🙂
would love to have that star in my pocket..
Happy holidays to you!!!!
🙂
incredibly simple, the way you write and so i quite like it! 🙂
I am flattered. I always thought my writing was too plain-Jane. And not sure if that is worth anything in today’s world. 😐
Very unique 🙂 I love the use of “I” between each line
thank you so much!!
wow this is really good! and thanks for visiting my blog. 🙂
Thank you Silly Charlie 😉
Thanks for the like on “Delicate Balance”. I’ve happily been looking at your blog as a result. 🙂 Your work is interesting, your infectious smile could light up a room.
Thank you so much *blush blush*
I am so moved by the rhythm of your words…as they serenade my ears…God bless dear sister…its a marvelous poem!
Describing the turbulence and conflicts inside one’s head is very tough. This one came out spontaneously..
I love the form on this TREMENDOUSLY! Why? The “I”…very powerful structure with it set aside like this…and if you want a real kick in the pants, come read my poem: Addiction (it’s in the sidebar of favorites at my site) because i think you will be amazed how our minds met long before actually meeting in the blogosphere. (I know I am!) So it must be true: great minds really DO think alike. 🙂
its proven now.
We think alike. 😀
*hugs*