They said it won’t last
I said, Hey! Don’t judge so fast..
They said you both don’t look fine
I said, Honey! Looks will refine..
They said it’ll be tough to be together
I said, Don’t sweat, and let us bother..
They asked are you sure about this?
I said, Darling! Trust me on this..
They said your parents won’t approve
I said, our love will be a proof..
They said running away will be the only option
I said let us first reach to that question..
They said the bets have been placed
I said, then let’s not talk, just wait..
Sakshi Vashist 
sweet!
thanks 😀
JUST SO BEAUTIFUL, SAKSHI.
So glad you liked it Neelkanth.
Be brave young lovers!
hehe…yes, courage is very much needed.
so nicely put.
thank you so much..
Nominated you for Sunshine Award
Cheers
this is overwhelming… thank you so much!!
I like it man’…
Thanks mate!
And let the spirit of love do the rest, Your poems reminded me of how blessed it is when two become one! Heres one i wrote in 2011, your words reminded me of this:
“So Heavenly”
When two lives become one together
As two hearts blend and beat as one
When God does smile upon you both
You will be blessed with a sweet outcome
When your minds do blissfully meld together
So when apart you still are one
You have made yourselves much stronger
making the spirit of true love to come
May the blessings of God daily surround you
And His eternal love always be so near
May your love overcome any and all obstacles
As the Lord takes away all your earthly fears
And you both will truly set a fine example
For those all around you each day to see
The bliss that is born when two marry in God
As it makes a blessed union so heavenly.
By Wendell A. Brown,
A wedding poem
Copyrighted 4/2/2011
And a second one to bless your evening as you have blessed mine with the love you share with the one you love,
“Combined”
Can anyone touch the new essence,
Born in the early morning sun?
Can anyone come between two young loves,
When they live and breathe as one?
Can anyone make a star fall from the sky,
Or sprout wings like a bird and fly?
Can anyone receive the gift of another’s affection,
And if in love with them question why?
For when two hearts become one together,
And their lives become so intertwined.
As two golden ropes sewn tightly together,
By heavenly grace they will remained combined.
By Wendell A. Brown
2010, Google Image credit,
God bless you both!
Thank you so much for sharing these incredible words with me. I could relate to each and every line you wrote there, its amazing how the feeling of love is so unique for everyone, yet so universal.