If the sight of my lover
Is all I would want in the morning
Oh take it back, Oh take it back
I can live with the memories instead…
If the voice of my dear
Is all I would want when I frown
Oh take it back, Oh take it back
I can close my eyes & hear all unsaid..
If the touch of my friend
Is all I would want when I feel upset
Oh take it back, Oh take it back
I can cuddle with a cold pillow & bed…
If love of that someone
Is all I want to live my life
Oh take it back, Oh take it back
I can become a living dead…
Sakshi Vashist 
Excellent.
thanks!!
beautiful! and emotional!
thanks Soumya!
Wonderful poem….
thanks Priyash!
Wicked!
thanks 😉
wonderful..poetry as well as those pics…
thank you so much!! pics speak louder than words, don’t they?
yes they do speak…but i have fallen in luv with the poetry…the written words…
love and passion for poetry always brings out great compositions!
Just awesome! Pure thoughts…. A very would think this way. 🙂 Liked it.
*very few
thank you Namrata!
and so true, many think this way!
Ha ha 😀 This isnt solitude 😀 solitude is far better than asking someone to take it back 😀 it is more of an exaltation than suffering. Nice comparisons except that you cant become a living dead 😀
thoughts of a poet…can’t all be scientifically logical right? 😉
ha ha 😀 that is ridiculous 😛 science? screw it while writing…will your conscience accept to live dead? nope..
Good
thanks Shawkath!
why ask him to———-to take back????????? be with him, close to him—stay together and comfort each other
Sometimes emotional times take a toll on people!
Beautiful, grounded and just what I needed too 🙂
Oh Jason, don’t give (or take) it back, embrace it…pain brings out the best poets..!!
Hi Sakshi,
The more I read, the more I find your blog intriguing. And for that reason, I’ve nominated your blog for “Blog of the year 2012” award! 🙂 You can check it out and collect the star over here:
Well, to to tell you the truth, a few days back I saw someone being nominated for “Blog of the year 2012″ award and I thought to myself, when am I getting tat feather in my hat.
And God heard me so soon, its blissful.. A post-thanksgiving Thanks to you 🙂
Have a good day!
Awww.. Am glad I made your day & here’s to you collecting more & more! 🙂
Ummm.. No intention of spamming you but I just did nominate you for a Reality Award, unsure if you already have one! You can check it out here:
thank you thank you thank you 😀
very true!!! 🙂 🙂 good one!
thank you so much!! 😀
So very mesmerizing!
Thank you so much Wendell..