If only…

If only I could count each time I blink my eyes

If onlyΒ I could jump and reach sky high

If only I could shout out and control my cries

If only I could shut the world and seize my sighs

If only I could dance on every beat my heart tries

If only I could sing along to chirping birds in the sky

If only I could tell u with each breath that I love u

If only I could tell u every time I want to try

If only…


40 thoughts on “If only…

    • Hi,
      The words are mine, although I can only wish I painted that well πŸ˜‰
      Picture is picked from Google Images!

      Thanks for your appreciation, means a lot to me!

    • Unfortunately I haven’t painted this!
      I only wish I could do this good..

      This is just hand picked from Google Images, belongs to the unknown rightful owner!

      Thanks for dropping by Sylvie! I loved your blog!!

  1. If ONLY dieting could stops the sighs ,
    From candy coated expanding thighs,
    The stares, the looks, the gasps “OH MYs,
    To the dreams of being a smaller size.
    Great piece. I enjoyed it very much…

    • I love this πŸ˜‰
      Exactly my feeling Sooz!
      Maybe I should write on your lines, it’ll turn out more interesting and delightful πŸ˜‰

      • I can already tell that you are a beautiful and passion filled writer. I believe in my heart that you and IARE kindred spirits.

        • Thanks Sooz!
          I have seen your style of writing, so carefree and fun! Even your posts on politics aren’t boring πŸ˜‰ quite an insight, reading that one!

          Keep writing, hun!

          • As you, I ALSO write poetry, however I very rarely EVER display it. I am afraid that my poetic work would conflict with the comedic persona ya know? I don’t wanna confuse folks.

            I AM however a VERY DEEP intruistic poet!!!

          • Then you should start another blog..!!
            Even I felt poetry and prose should not be combined in the same blog, so I started a parallel one!
            Would love to see your versatility gal..! Bring it ON πŸ˜‰

  2. “Even I felt poetry and prose should not be combined in the same blog”
    Thanks, for liking my “rebellious” post. πŸ˜‰
    I enjoyed reading your creative poem (great illustration, as well). It evoked vivid images and emotion.
    I might have to start a blog under an alias, so my poetry has freedom to breathe.
    Anybody else out there, write under an alias?

    All the best to you and your writing future.

    • Oh alias/pen name, you can chose any identity you want πŸ˜‰
      so many options out there!

      Thanks for reading!

      Keep dropping by!

  3. “If only…” I wonder how often people think about those very words. Very nice poem and I think meaningful for everyone who has had the good fortune to read your words.

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